It was but yesterday
I thought to myself
A tiny bit of fragment
Quivering like a feather
As ripples upon the waves
Like a Soulless sparrow
Without a rhythmic song
In the sphere of life.
Far beyond the crevices
Of forgotten remembrances
I heard a song of sweetness
Like a flower unfurling
Its lotus petals in the sky
Tiny feet running barefoot
Upon the silvery greens
And in this profound Silence
A captivating moment
I realized that, I am the sphere
And all life in rhythmic fragments
Moves within Me………………..
Hello Kamal,
what a wonderful poem ….”rhythmic fragments”, I love this. We vibrate just like the whole nature 🙂
Thank you
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Welcome Ben for your beautiful feedback. Yes my friend we all move in rhythmic fragments here and there and our nature is so energetic and vibrant. Absolutely true. Have a great day, Ben.
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A terrific poem 🙂
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Thanks dear friend
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Lovely
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Thanks.
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I love the photo you choose to accompany this spiritual poem. Looks like the etheral Northern Lights. How true, we are all part of the whole and the whole is us.
miriam
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Thanks dear Miriam for these wonderful comments and yes somehow I found this picture that so suited the song of us being the whole and finally realizing that the rhythm and everything in it is only us there is no separation. Have a great day, Miriam.
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Oh wow, so beautiful. I could feel the rhythm as I read . . . as if nature were speaking to me. I heard the “song of sweetness” 🙂 Thank you for sharing!
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Welcome and thanks Leila for your superb words. Ya same here could hear the rhythmic fantasy of the sweet song of myself. Have a great day dear.
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You too 😊
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Thanks dear.
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This is truth,which many of us don’t.you captured very wonderfully in those lines.
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Thanks so much for your superb comments, Kalyan. Ya for sure this is our souls reality a rhythmic fantasy.
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Yeah..you are correct
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Thanks Kalyan.
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Wonderful poem!
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Thanks Luisa.
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So pretty Kamal :):) I love poems, poetry.
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Thanks for the beautiful words Maggie and same here so much soul poems have.
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I agree 🙂
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Thanks dear.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thanks Michael as always
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lovely
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Thanks
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Its beautifully worded. We are but ‘tiny fragments’ and yet all fragments are within us. There’s a lovely rhythm to the poem.
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Thanks Smitha for your great comments. Yes just tiny fragments r we in this whole sphere of life and yet we r everything and everywhere. Have a great day.
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Thanks Michael as always
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Beautiful, so deep and so true
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Thanks dear for your great comments. Have a great day.
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Welcome friend
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Thanks dear.
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Lovely, Kamal – not only the language and cadence, but also the concept behind it. We are all one with everything – the sphere, as you so beautifully put it.
xx,
mgh
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Thanks so much my friend for these lovely words. So true when you think to yourself that everything is in you there is nothing outside. Good night dear and to my wonderful Tink as well. Love and Hugs to you both.
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G’nite my friend.
xx, mgh
Woof! TINK
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Good night see you tomorrow morning.
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Nice poetry. 👍
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Thanks Pooja.
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Welcome. 😃
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Thanks.
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Kamal, I am speechless! Its a brilliant composition, each word so perfect to frame a beautiful and profound poetry! Well done dear 🙂
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Thanks so much dear Radhika and I was knowing you will love the poem. Sometimes we have such great tastes and love writing poems of profundity. Welcome for your wonderful feedback. Have a wonderful day.
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Keep writing more of such poems Kamal. A pleasure reading it 🙂
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Thanks dear and the same goes to you to, Radhika.
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This is some real good stuff
I write somewhere along a similar idea too
Could you read my posts? It would mean the a lot to me
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and yes will definitely do so. It is so nice to have people who are like minded and think on these lines.
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Thank YOU💝
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Welcome.
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rhythm…. emotions…. honest expression …….you play with words dear !
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Thanks dear Rekha for these wonderful melodious words.
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🙂
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Truly lovely, Kamal. Hugs.
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Welcome so much for your superb words dear Genevieve. Hugs to you too have a great day.
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Beautiful thoughts Kamal.
You have expressed the thoughts of nature itself.
👍
Shiva
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Thanks Shiva and yes the nature in their rhythm is all in me. The sphere is all a beautiful dance.
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks Bella.
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Another of your beautiful poems. Thanks for being so special. We are part of the whole and the whole is the sum of all of us. Nice day to you!
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Thanks so much dear friend for your awesome feedback. Yes all are One no difference at all. You too have a great day and speedy recovery.
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Thank you!
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Welcome.
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So beautiful, and true!! Last two lines are wonderfully put! Thank you for posting 🙂
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Thanks for the beautiful comment. Yes finally u realize that the rhythmic sphere is only u.
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A truly delightful poem, Kamal.
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Thanks dear Robbie so much.
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very beautiful. It is awesome
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Thanks so much friend.
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Profound and very precious reflections 🌼
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Thanks dear so much.
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Wonderful posts dear 😀😀 Very lovely x x
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Thanks dear for your kind words
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You are most welcome dear 😊😊 x x
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Thanks once again.
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Absolutely wonderful this is!
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Thanks Kunal
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We rarely understand our worth and this message shows us that precisely. As always, thank you for spreading the positivity.
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Welcome dear once again for your beautiful feedback. When deep down u think about yourself everything is in us
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Yes it surely is, Kamal. It’s my pleasure
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Welcome dear.
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Very beautiful!
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Thanks Kim.
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That’s deep and indeed rhythmic Kamal!
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Thanks dear Meenakshi.
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From the heart 🙂
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Thanks dear Steve.
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