I was inspired by My Friend, Jonathan from noblesthemes blog. He writes amazing and beautiful poems. This poem of his “Can I Take You………..” moved me to write a lovely poem. Thank you Jonathan. My verses are given below:
My Precious Love,
Can I take You alone on this journey?
Where there is just you and me
Hand in hand we can walk together
In tune with our magical steps
Whistling winds calling us in a whisper
In the quietude and silence of the now
Under the gazing twinkling stars
Guiding us on a beautiful path
Finding gratitude in the little things
Complete in each other’s arms.
At a distance we can hear
Waves splashing against the rocks
Creating rhythmic sounds of silence
Paddling our feet in the cool waters
Laughing like carefree souls gone crazy
This radiant moment is ours to cherish
Can I take You, My Precious Love?
Where Love in all her tenderness
Clasps us in her hearts embraces
Where Joy and Happiness pervades
In all their grandeur and passion……….
Ah…this is a journey of beautiful love. Seamless flow of words draw a picture of perfect bliss Kamal ❤️❤️
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Thankful dear Radhika for your wonderful words.
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This is pure bliss.
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Thanks for your kind words dear Rupali 👌❣️❣️🤗
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A beautiful and a heartfelt poem, Kamal✨❤️
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Thankful for your valuable feedback dear Nathi. How are you hope all is well. Take care and stay safe 💓💓💓💓
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Beautiful 🌷🌈🎶🌹
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Thanks dear Morag 🙏🏻♥️🌷🌷
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You are welcome 🤗
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Such a serene, soothing sense of love! Kamal, this absolutely beautiful. ❤️
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Thankful dear Punam for your kind words. Take care and stay safe 💓💓💓💓
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My pleasure. Enjoy the weekend. 😊💕
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❤️❤️❤️you too enjoy the weekend Punam.
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An anthem of love…beautiful, Kamal!!
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Thankful for your lovely words dear Indira.
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What a beautiful love poem! This would be perfect to be read at a wedding, to be given on an anniversary, or to be read on a picnic blanket with the sun shining, a brook gurgling nearby, and two lovers reading it to each other. xo
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Wow such beautiful and lovely words added to this poem of mine, Pam. Yes would agree totally with your words. It would be lovely to recite at a wedding when two people are about to becoming One in wedlock. Thanks a lot.
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How beautiful.. A great romantic poem Kamal dear friend.. Peace.. Tranquility.. And good vibes we feel through the lines.. GOD BLESS You dear.. Keep writing.. Stay well 😊💐
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Thankful so much for these warmhearted words dear friend Sohair. God Bless you too and stay safe and take care of yourself.
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You also dear friend Kamal 😊💐
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Dear Kamal, this is such a sweet, life-affirming, gentle, and hopeful poem!
Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful art:) Big hugs and many blessings
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Thankful for your valuable and lovely words dear Maria. Much love and hugs to you too. Stay blessed at all times.
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Aww thank you dear Kamal! You are a beautiful soul, thanks for being so uplifting and kind:) Love, light, and hugs:)
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You are always welcome dear Maria. You too are a wonderful Soul. Take care dear.
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💜 💜 💜 Thank you, how sweet:) 💜 💜 💜
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This is really beautiful. You can visit our website and submit your writings
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Thanks for your kind words and for sure will do so 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Thank you once again and for sure will visit your site and take part in the picture prompt too. Take care and stay healthy.
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Beautifully penned!
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Thanks dear Megala.
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Oh Kamal! I so love your poem, so much that there are tears in my eyes. It makes my heart ache in longing and yet also satisfies the desire for serene beauty of love in the depths of my soul. This poem is serenely beautiful, and surely displays the beautiful heart of its author. Thank you! And blessings to you, dear Kamal! ❤ ❤ ❤
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I am so grateful and thankful for your kind and warmhearted words dear Jonathan. I loved your poem so much that yesterday itself in the evening the verses just fell like magic on paper. You too are such a wonderful and kindhearted person. Keep it going. Love and blessings to you dear.
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Too good! I like the flow of this poem.
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Thank you so much Balroop.
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a serene and romantic encounter with love of nature herself, magic!
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Thankful for your lovely words dear Kate 💕💕🌹🌹💕
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Such magical beautiful love – an amazing feeling to read through ✨💛✨💛✨
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Thankful for your kind words dear.❤️❤️❤️😊😊😊
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Lovely, Kamal!
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Thanks a lot Bette ❤️😊😊♥️
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Very beautiful, subtle and deep poem
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Thankful for your kind words Bella ❣️❣️❣️❣️
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Wow kamal..this is certainly wonderful and sweet and endearing..😊😊😊
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Thankful for your kind words dear Mich 💖💖💖💖
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks dear😊😊🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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peace and love. beautiful as always, Kamal! 🙂
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Thankful for your kind words dear Wilma ♥️🌷😊
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So lovely writings with beautiful words. loved it❤️😊
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Thanks Olivia.
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A perfect love poem for any valentine, worthy to reblog!
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Thanks a lot dear Zaza. Love and light 💘💘💘💘
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Reblogged this on scribeforlove.wordpress.com and commented:
A lovely poem for any Valentine, worthy to re-blog here, Merci, Kamal.
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Thankful for your valuable and kindness dear Zaza. True 👍🏼❣️❣️😊😊
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Merci beaucoup ❤️❤️❤️
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So heartfelt.
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Thankful dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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So beautiful kamal❤️🙏 much love 🥰
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Thank you so much dear Barbara. Love and light to you too.
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This is a beautiful poem about the joy of love, Kamal.
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Thankful for your lovely words dear Robbie 💘❤️❤️💘
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Beautiful prose and sentiment Kamal. 🧡
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Thankful for your kind words dear Brad💓💓💓😊😊😊
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You’re most welcome. 🙂
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Wow….powerful poem….love it!!
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Thankful for your valuable words dear Kirt 🙏🏻😊😊♥️
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Kamal. wow! A beautiful poem of wonder, hope and love … an inspiration of a life lived in complete harmony, appreciating every nuance of our existence jointly! Wonderful response to the prompt ‘Can I take you..’
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Thankful for your valuable feedback dear Annika. I loved the words so much when I read Jonathan’s poem that my imagination completely ran riot with these beautiful verses. Love and light to you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Beautiful poem, Kamal. I love it that another blogger inspired you. ❤
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Yes Diana the title of his poem just moved me to write few verses and make it into a poem. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Lovely poem.
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Thanks a lot Elizabeth 😊😊😊😊
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A very loving and romantic poem. Wonderful imagery 😊
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Thankful for your lovely words, Walt🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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My pleasure 😊
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Awesome poem, so nicely written, all about a beautiful love affair
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Yes for sure. A lovely love affair. Thank you so much dear Denise.
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