Can I Take You………

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I was inspired by My Friend, Jonathan from noblesthemes blog. He writes amazing and beautiful poems. This poem of his “Can I Take You………..” moved me to write a lovely poem. Thank you Jonathan. My verses are given below:

My Precious Love,

Can I take You alone on this journey?

Where there is just you and me

Hand in hand we can walk together

In tune with our magical steps

Whistling winds calling us in a whisper

In the quietude and silence of the now

Under the gazing twinkling stars

Guiding us on a beautiful path

Finding gratitude in the little things

Complete in each other’s arms.

At a distance we can hear

Waves splashing against the rocks

Creating rhythmic sounds of silence

Paddling our feet in the cool waters

Laughing like carefree souls gone crazy

This radiant moment is ours to cherish

Can I take You, My Precious Love?

Where Love in all her tenderness

Clasps us in her hearts embraces

Where Joy and Happiness pervades

In all their grandeur and passion……….

84 thoughts on “Can I Take You………

  1. What a beautiful love poem! This would be perfect to be read at a wedding, to be given on an anniversary, or to be read on a picnic blanket with the sun shining, a brook gurgling nearby, and two lovers reading it to each other. xo

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      1. How beautiful.. A great romantic poem Kamal dear friend.. Peace.. Tranquility.. And good vibes we feel through the lines.. GOD BLESS You dear.. Keep writing.. Stay well 😊💐

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  2. Oh Kamal! I so love your poem, so much that there are tears in my eyes. It makes my heart ache in longing and yet also satisfies the desire for serene beauty of love in the depths of my soul. This poem is serenely beautiful, and surely displays the beautiful heart of its author. Thank you! And blessings to you, dear Kamal! ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. I am so grateful and thankful for your kind and warmhearted words dear Jonathan. I loved your poem so much that yesterday itself in the evening the verses just fell like magic on paper. You too are such a wonderful and kindhearted person. Keep it going. Love and blessings to you dear.

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  3. Kamal. wow! A beautiful poem of wonder, hope and love … an inspiration of a life lived in complete harmony, appreciating every nuance of our existence jointly! Wonderful response to the prompt ‘Can I take you..’

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