Unbelievable……….

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An Incredible Title “Unbelievable” wrote my friend from scribesforlove blog. She wrote a beautiful Haiku and I continued further and made it into a Poem. Thank You Zaza always.

Bursting organdie sunsets

In all her flames of fire

Honey covered twilight

Flowing in its rhythmic tunes

Clouds turning into cotton pillows

Time to take a sweet nap

Golden rays shining as yellow hues

Upon the silvery waves

Creating ripples along the way

A cool breeze gently rolling by

Birds fast asleep in their branches

Not a noise from the rustling leaves

Night approaches shyly

In all her pretty dimpled boots

Halogen lights shining a shade better

A Mystical feeling of quietness

Sitting in wonder at the promenade

Watching twinkling stars in a cluster

A charming verse upon my lips

Unbelievable and profound

Is Nature at its all-time Best……………………

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60 thoughts on “Unbelievable……….

  1. Very clear and a poem written in many pictures. The attentive reader lives in this poem, is present and experiences the whole width of this beautiful falling night.

    A big thank you for the magic of your words.

    Be warmly embraced my dear friend Kamal – thanks for sharing it πŸ™‚
    In fact, this beauty comes from the beauty of your heart πŸ™‚
    Didi

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      1. Welcome, my dear Kamal πŸ™‚
        Thank you for your good wishes πŸ™‚
        May you and your family be blessed, may the whole mankind be blessed and start to think with their heart not with their mind and ego.
        Much love to you πŸ™‚
        Didi

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      2. Yes dear friend, Didi we all need to be egoless and live a life of humbleness and humility. U know after my poetry book I will publish a short stories book and mostly my stories r all about love and kindness and Oneness. Much love to you dear and I published my book in India and thanks to all your support and encouragement I have done good sales.

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    1. Thanks so much for your kind words dearest ❀️❀️ Zaza. U know just by picking up your three lines and the picture the verses fell like a poem. All thanks to my beloved Meher Baba πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ Next a bouquet of joy will flow too. Thanks for your three lines I can think of a poem.

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    1. U know I have this blogger friend and she comes out with amazing titles and few words of haiku and then seeing them a beautiful poem starts coming in me. Nice I too feel, Deeksha. U know I have published a poetry book known as Poet’s Touch’ and I have also put it on Amazon Kindle as an ebook.

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      1. That’s wonderful!! So I guessed it right, you are good with poetry!!
        Yes, I read a lot of bloggers writing about haiku challenges. A good inspiration makes the words flow automatically. I wish for you many more poetry books on the way in near future… 😊 😊

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