
My Dear Soul!
If only you would love to let, go
Of your unwanted fears and anxieties
Pulling you to the depths of despair
Cutting you like a Sword in half
And You, My poor ravaged Soul
Am feeling so sad seeing you like this
Left bleeding and dying on the floor
Edge this Egoist madness
Out of the window, this very moment
Life is so short My Dear Soul!
To cry and writhe in despair
Clothe yourself entirely
In my Sword of Love
Welcome gentle steps of ecstasy
As little rhythms of shyness
Fight your own battles with the heart of a Lion
Holding only the Sword of Love
And the valor in your eyes
Let our Dear God enter your core
Love would heal the Swordβs fury
For that I am pretty sure
My Dear Soul!
Thank you my lovely friend, Zaza from scribeforlove blog for always inspiring me with her Haikus and awesome Titles.
This is just wonderful.. really well done.
Love this line: Fight your own battles with the heart of a Lion
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Thanks my dear Moushmi and yes it sure is why despair and be miserable fight your own battles and roar like a lion.
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Great piece of art..πΈ
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Thanks a lot.
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Beautiful. Just want I needed today Kamal π
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Oh that is great to hear Ashok. Thanks so much.
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My pleasure Kamal. Thank you π
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Welcome Ashok πππππ
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Drew me in.
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Thanks so muchπππππ
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βTo heal is to touch with love that which was previously touched by fear.β
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Yes absolutely true Indira and we all heal with love and prayers and never with fear. Thanks so much ππππππ
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This is very poignant and passionate, and really speaks to my soul, Kamal!
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Thanks so much for your valuable feedback dear Jonathan and once we have his love then nothing matters but follow him and be blissful within our soul.ππππππ
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Beautiful.
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Thanks πππ
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That ego causes so much pain, nicely written poem
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Thanks Denise and yes it sure does not allowing our real soul to enjoy blissful happiness.ππππππ
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our ego and fears are our only real enemies, once we conquer them we will know true freedom!
So beautifully and powerfully written Kamal, thanks π
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Yes absolutely true and agree with your words, Kate all is due to our egoic mind once that is conquered then there is true freedom. Thanks so much for your valuable feedback.ππππππ
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you’re most welcome Kamal!
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Thanks Kate πβ€οΈππ
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Life would be much easier if we learn to let go of our fears and anxieties. Beautifully written, Kamalji!
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Yes absolutely true and agree totally with your words, Shweta. Thanks so much ππππππ
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The pleasure is all mine. Hope you’re having a good day!
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Thanks so much dear and all good today being a holiday. Where do u stay Shweta
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I stay in Bangalore π
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K a nice place, Shweta ππ
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Far from home, but it is nice. π
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K but wherever we r there is home
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Also true. But my first home is where my family is. β₯οΈ
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Yes absolutely true πππππ
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My dear friend Kamal π
Beautiful words in a dialogue with your soul – the sword of our mind separates, cuts one into two, but the sword of love unites and merges two into one.
Indeed, our soul is under control of the mind – the mind tells where to go, where to have our attention, what pleasures we are after and so on – but it is our soul that gives this power and energy to our mind – we (as souls) should learn to control our mind then the mind will be a good servant – now our mind is a bad master…
Thank you, my dear friend and have a happy time.
Much love and light to you
Didi
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Welcome at all times dear friend Didi and for giving your profound take of reality and truth on the sword of Love. Thanks so much πππππππππππππ
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Welcome, my friend π
A happy time to you π
Didi
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Thanks so much dear friend πππππππ
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Shed the facade of ego….each line so positive and inspiring Kamal β€οΈ
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Thanks dear Radhika for your valuable feedback.ππππππ
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A killing sword turned into a sword of Love and God. Very beautifully expressed, Kamal. I hope the sword and their owners listen to your poetic prayer.
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Haha for sure and hope so then everything will change and there will be just love. Thanks M for your valuable feedback ππππππ
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Beautifully penned! I enjoyed reading these inspiring lines.
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Thanks dear Megala for your valuable words.πππππππππππ
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You are most welcome! π
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Thanks so much Megala ππππππ
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All I can say is Merci! and God is happy about us sharing our gifts for the world to be inspire towards Him! This poem was worth the wait! Bravo to you!!!
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Thanks so much for your valuable feedback and sometimes u really require such poems that r right after all.ππππππ
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Reblogged this on scribeforlove.wordpress.com.
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Thanks so much dear Zaza for the reblog. God bless ππππ π
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on Monday
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Great
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I love this poem. Thanks to scribe for love for reblogging it. You are a great poet Kamal
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Thanks so much for your kind words and Zaza really inspires me to write these poems. They flow like loveππππππππππ
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I love your fighting spirit! It roars with the elegance of a Queen and the gentleness of a kitten. Keep writing Kamal. Keep sharing your heart. The world is changed by your wisdom. Sincerely, Andrea
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Thank you so much dear Andrea for these valuable feedback and we all are trying our best to share a little wisdom what we can towards one and all through our lovely blogs. Have a lovely day dear.
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Welcome.
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Awesome, Kamal, just awesome! How gifted you are with the word. Thank you! π¦
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Thanks so much dear Amy for these wonderful words. Sometimes poetry just flows. Have a great day.
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You have yourself a great day too!
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Beautifully penned.Truly inspiring
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Thanks Meena so much πππππ
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Love the positivity here, fitting metaphors. Nice piece.
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Thanks so much Mark for your valuable feedback
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