My beautiful friend, Zaza from ‘Scribesforlove’ inspired me to write a Haiku or a Poem on this great word ‘SPEECHLESS’. Thank you Zaza for your encouragement. The poem reads:
Speechless, I stood motionless
And let the oceanic waves
Flow beneath my feet
Feeling the cool waters
Enjoying the ecstatic moment in bliss
Speechless, I stood watching
The flock of birds, flapping their wings
Flying high up in the blue skies
In groups of four or more
Forming a mystical symphony
Speechless, I stood gazing
At the tiny tots playing in the garden
In all their innocence, smiles of joy
Wished I was that child of delight
And joined them in their joyful laughter
Speechless, I stood in amazement
At the beauty that is me
A work of art created by my Father
Who had painted me in his perfection
Nothing more or Nothing less
Speechless, I stood in silence
In awe with the beautiful panorama
And thanked my Beloved profusely
For showering his Grace and Love
In his kindness on all Humanity…………………
Oh, well done, K!!!
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Thank you so much dear K.
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You make me speechless with this wonderful poem Kamal.
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Thanks my dear friend Rupali. Speechless are we in this vast ocean.
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I am speechless dear Kamal at this beautiful poem!!! Congratulations! ❤
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Thank you, Thank you my lovely friend, Amira and I am feeling so blessed. Zaza gave me such a wonderful word and the words just flowed. God bless.
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Kamal, wonderfully uplifting poem that resonates deeply with me. So many of the situations leave me likewise speechless, just letting the essence of the moment flow within me, harbouring the feeling of absolute awe and precious nature of life itself! 😀
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Yes so true and you have written it so beautifully. You too must frame a poem on these lines, Annika and for sure a wonderful apt poem will emerge. Thank you so much for your wonderful words.
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Beautiful Kamal. That’s how nature makes us feel about her beauty…. absolutely speechless ❤️
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Yes dear Radhika and speechless we watch and wonder at the beauty that is so filled with his Love and Grace. Thanks so much dear.
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Things of beauty that leaves one speechless and your words are breath taking my friend.
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Thanks a trillion for these wonderful words dear friend. You leave me Speechless.
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You are very welcome. This title was perfect as your post are wonderfully written!🌹
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Thanks always for your kind words. May I know what you name is cause it is nice to refer to anyone by their first names. I hope you don’t mind.
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You are always welcome, your work warrants such comments. And my name is Roy and no I don’t mind at all.😊
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Oh great to hear that Roy. Thanks.
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Very welcome!
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Thanks
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😊
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Speechless reading your beautiful verse, dear Kamal. Thank you for sharing these amazing moments with us. 🙂
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Thank you my dear friend, Krishnapriya for your valued thoughts and speechless we wonder in awe at the beauty around us.
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Yes and your bring it in front of us so beautifully with your words. I feel grateful and blessed to dip into it. 🙏💕
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Thanks once again a trillion times. You know the word Speechless is so powerful the words simply flowed in such a wordless way. Love and plenty of hugs my friend.
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You are most welcome — words flowed in a wordless way — i soooo love these wordless words! You are just so wonderful Kamal. 🙂
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Thanks dear once again. Have a pleasant day.
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Beautiful Kamal!!
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Thanks Jodi
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Absolutely lovely Kamal. You have a wonderful gift.
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Thanks dear Brigid for your lovely words.
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So deeply beautiful, Kamal, your poem speaks to my very soul … Profound and inspiring!
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Thanks dear Jonathan for these wonderful words and yes it spoke to me too in this wordless way.
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Kamal, I am speechless on reading this 🙏🙏👌
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Thanks dear Deepika for your superb words and the speechless simply flow
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Thank you for the lovely poem Kamal. Your words guide us to that beautiful place of silent awe, appreciating the wonders and beauty around us. blessings my friend.
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Thanks dear Brad for your kind words. Speechless we stand and stare at the wonders of everything. Blessings to you too dear.
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You’re most welcome.
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Thanks Brad
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This is marvelously ‘speechless’ and worthy to re-blog…yahoo!
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Thanks so much dear Zaza for your encouragement and the word Speechless was so awesome that the words just flew.
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a cosmic blessing for all!
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Yes absolutely and all from Him who is all pervading and we are all in his Beauty.
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There are always ecstatic moments in life,may be hidden or away from our sights… you penned it well kamal.. how those moments make us speechless
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I am speechless after reading your beautiful poem, Kamal. Love the gorgeous imagery and its deep meaning, also spiritual and religious. It is only interesting to observe that you address God in the masculine form (his Grace, Love and kindness on Humanity). I cannot conceive God as entirely masculine or feminine. Perhaps it is both or perhaps we just need to humanise that entity because whatever there is escapes our knowledge.
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First of all a great Thank You for your wonderful words, Marta and as I always refer to our Father as the Masculine Gender and not the Feminine because the Feminine is the other part of the Lord who is always there with Him as his companion and the Lord is always in the Male form though this too is an illusion because according to him this is just a body that has masculine and feminine qualities but we have to go above that and come to a balance. He keeps on coming as the Avatar and He is always Male. Yes and All Him who is in Every living and non living things. His world and His creation are we. Though with our limited minds we require some image of His but after a point He has said we need not require His image also cause He is Omnipotent and Omnipresent everywhere.
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But still, isn’t God overly masculinised by human beings? I think we have created heteropatriarchal societies since the ancient times when the main religious books were written like the Bible, the Quran, etc. They were written by men, not by women. There was no gender equality between women and men. I have no doubt that prophets like Jesus Christ, Buddha, Mahoma and all the others have existed. But where are the women prophets? We have perpetuated this discrimination and thus men are still the ones who are in power. Therefore it is not surprising that God is seen as a masculine entity and that ancient religious texts are still interpreted discriminating women. I am not for a matriarch either. I think no gender is superior to the other but, as I said, I cannot conceive God as overly masculine or overly feminine. Anyway, I simply intended to show my reflections. As for your poem, like everything you write, I can only say it is beautifully written. You are a very talented writter, Kamal. Keep crafting such beauty and truth with your words and have a lovely day! BTW, I want to thank you again for checking out my friend Mario’s blog. Like you, he is an excellent writer.
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Thank you dear Marta for your great observations and it is nice to be conversing on this topic also but everyone has their own ideas. He is not responding much to our posts also M. It becomes a great flow when we each comment and it becomes so meaningful to keep on writing. Mario is very good I read his posts regularly.
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You are kindly welcome, Kamal. If Mario does not respond much to us is because he works too many hours and has no time left but for his writing a new chapter of his novel every week. It is not because he does not appreciate us. I am glad that you like his writing and that you read his posts regularly. Thank you again!
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Thanks M and he is a great writer and I too am getting inspired cause even I am writing a book of short stories and am right now making a small poetry book from all my poems that i post on WordPress so he is too good and thanks for introducing him to me as a blogger.
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You are kindly welcome, Kamal.
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Thanks so much dear Marta. Have a wonderful day.
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You too!
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Thanks.
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you nailed it Kamal, sharing the wonder of speechless beauty that flows around us each and every day 🙂
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Thank you my dear friend Kate and I loved your true thoughts on being Speechless.
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you are most welcome Kamal, keep creating 🙂
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Thanks dear Kate actually i am going to publish these poems of mine in a short book and my son will be helping me in the design and it is going to be named Poet’s Touch. Lets see with the blessings of dear Meher Baba the book will come out so am working on that now Kate .
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good for you Kamal, a great project that will bring blessings to many 🙂
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Thanks so much dear Kate for your kind words.
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Uniquely penned… an exceptional poetic achievement.
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Thanks for your beautiful feedback, Lance.
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My sincere pleasure.
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Welcome.
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Wow, awesome post
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Thanks Denise.
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Yes for sure dear. Some moments are really speechless. Thanks for the valuable feedback
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And speechless I sit by the screen of my computer reading your beautiful verse 🙂
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Oh such a great compliment dear friend. Speechless is that only to read it in her beauty. Thanks for the beautiful comment.
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Always a pleasure 🙂
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Thanks
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Such a wonderful way to capture the beauty in people, yourself, the world. I love it, you’ve written this beautifully! xx
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Thanks for the beautiful comment dear.
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Imagery of your words has always been pleasing. 🙂
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Hope you’re doing good. 🙂
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Hi dear Harsh thanks a trillion for your kind words I am good how r you and your family and studies
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Hello, I am very good. Thank you so much. Everything’s going great, I just got done with my boards exam. 🙂
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Oh fantastic that is great. So now time to relax for a bit right.
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Oh, this left me speechless!
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Thanks dear Moushmi so much.
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Wow! I’m totally speechless! 🙂
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Thanks dear and yes speechless in their very essence.
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Speechlesssly beautiful
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Thank you so much dear Bella.
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Splendid work praising His work
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Truly a speechless poem . Beautifully penned
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Thank you so my for your lovely words dear Tanvir.
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My pleasure 😇
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Welcome.
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This is a wonderful poem, Kamal.
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Thanks so much dear Robbie
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I can relate to couple of these moments. Or may be all of them 🙂
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Oh that is great Hammad and to be Speechless and Stand and stare at nothing in particular. Thanks for the lovely words.
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This is gorgeous!
I love your ending
Love, light and glitter
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Eliza.
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Thanks so much dear Zaza.
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