Hearts like doors
Opens with effortless ease
That radiates as a loving friend
With a warm ‘thank you Sir
And if you please’.
But today I take the liberty
To change the words to read
‘Hearts like doors, open with ease
With utmost care and love
And compassion if you please!’
Hearts give us precious life
It can flutter and flirt too
And can be wayward as hell
Keeps you active and cheerful
Glowing through every life
The heart beats softly, gently
For the one person it loves tenderly
It waits patiently, its angelic wings spread
And when it is freed with care
It flies eternally to that Open Door……………
Lovely.
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Thanks Yagnesh
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Beautiful poetry.
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Thanks dear Bev
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The door of heart can be opened with the key of smile 🙂
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Yes absolutely true and agree with your words dear Indira the heart that opens with a smile and happiness. Thanks so much.
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So beautifully written, Kamalji! 👌🙌
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Thanks for the beautiful comment dear Shweta.
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It was my pleasure. 😄
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Thanks once again dear Shweta
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♥️😄
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This is a lovely poem full of tender feelings Kamal. 🙂
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Thanks so much dear Brad for your great comments.
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You’re welcome.
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Thanks Brad.
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This is nice
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Thanks Nana.
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A beautifully penned poem! Opening the doors of our hearts, letting the love soar with wings of light! ❤ A lovely picture to go with this poem dear Kamal! ❤
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Thanks a million dear Amira for your kind words and yes so true just opening doors to hearts that have all the love soaring on wings of light and His Divine Grace. Yes even I too loved the picture it was so apt with the poem.
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Lovely. Nice imagery, too.
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Thanks so much dear Rue.
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Lovely poem, and profoundly true.
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Thanks so much for your beautiful feedback, Robert.
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So very beautiful
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Thank you so much dear Miriam.
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You’re welcome 💕
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Thanks dear.
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Your poem about the heart is so sweet and tender … and true.
It is with gentleness and true care you can open a heart.
miriam
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Thanks so much dear Miriam and yes absolutely Hearts are so tender that with Love and Care they can open vistas of joy and happiness.
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What a beautiful and all encompassing loving read..to let our hearts open and let everyone be…loved it💐💐
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Oh thank you so much dear friend for your kind words. Hearts are just like that opening vistas of love everywhere one goes.
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Beautiful and soft.
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Thanks dear Rupali
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Yeah, absolutely true! When you give love you get love and heart is so pure that even you give an ounce of affection, it gives away a ton of love. It gets playful when it wants and keeps the adrenaline moving.
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Yes so true Piyush and hearts are the joy of our lives and once they open their doors to love then they just go crazy. Thank you so much for your beautiful comments.
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Beautiful poem Kamal. Full of wisdom.
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Thanks dear Tanvir and hearts that opens doors to love and happiness.
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good one Kamla.. heart is always leaned towards an opened door
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Hi Akhila after ages I am seeing you here again. Missed you and thank you so much dear for your great feedback.
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so glad to hear from you kamal.. kindly have a look in your spam.. i remember commenting previously also…
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K but you know Akhila these spams are really irritating me so many come asking for all nonsense things. How are you and how is your writing going.
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I am fine .. hope you too..are you not getting feeder notifications of my posts as before..?
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No, no not at all Akhila. Wait let me go to your site once again and check. My daughter delivered a baby boy on 22nd October so now I have become very busy granny.
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woww……….. that’s truly heartwarming… hope mom and babe is fine…
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Thanks dear and yes they both are fine with the blessings of Meher Baba. How is your son must have grown up. We have named him, Zahan meaning Gift of God.
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Lovely
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Thanks so much
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This is very beautiful, Kamal.
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Thanks dear Robbie.
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This is truly lovely! Keep the doors ajar, Kamal!
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Thanks once again Kunal for your feedback.
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Wonderful poem! Who knows when the heart will open and when it will close!! 🙂
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Thanks dear Megala and yes hearts that opens wide its doors to love and happiness.
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Enchanting!
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Thanks so much dear Meenakshi.
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Its my good luck Kamal to visit this blog 🙂
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wow this is powerfully profound but ever so gentle .. Meenakshi said it “enchanting” and enchanted!
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Thanks Kate and yes both words are so true for hearts that opens doors wide for Love and happiness.
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indeed, the best kind that we all aspire to 🙂
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Yes dear and hope we could open our hearts to love one and all cause we are in that Oneness who Loves us Immensely.
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limitless unconditional love, we are one!
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Unconditional Love to you too dear Kate.
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will reply to your email tomorrow, need to get to sleep as I’ve got a busy day ahead, night sweet granny 🙂
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Oh for sure good night dear, sleep well.
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How I almost missed this powerful read…so excellent from you!
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Its k, dear Zaza it happens. Thank you so much for your valuable comments.
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i’m healing more each day, thanks be to God.
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Oh so nice to hear these wonderful words, Zaza. Blessings from the Lord.
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Thank you kindly…are you back into swing of work and being grandpapa?
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Grnadmama, Zaza and not grandpapa, and I have started working and my daughter has gone to her house. I go very often cause we live very near. Welcome always dear.
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oops, so sorry….
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It’s k dear happens don’t worry
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Lovely..!!
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Thanks.
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Welcome
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Thanks once again.
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Love this, thank you…so happy to be reading you! Blessings and peace.
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Thanks for the kind words. Hearts that open doors to love and happiness. Blessings to you too.
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Sweet, tender, beautifully written, Kamal. A most powerful and eloquent tribute to the truth of our hearts.
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Thanks dear for your kind and loving words for hearts that open doors to love and happiness.
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You are very kindly welcome.
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Thanks dear.
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