Razor’s sharp edge
A satin finish, silently glides
Through glades of the wind.
Chivalrous and smooth
Can cut you to pieces
If you have not mastered
Its artistic brilliance.
In the hands of a novice
Simply a playful toy.
In the hands of a brave warrior
Chest as strong as iron
Hidden among his pinions
Woven deeply into his very soul.
Through accurate precision
Moving effortlessly across miles
Cutting rhythms of sharpness
Without a sound………………….
This was indeed the beautiful work…..
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Oh thanks so much friend.
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You are welcome Kamal.
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Thanks
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very deep and thoughtful writing..
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Thanks so much for your great comments.
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Beautiful piece of work Kamal !!
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Thanks Tanvir
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Most welcome 😊
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A beautiful composition Kamal. I loved the last two lines the most!!
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Thanks Radhika and yes the sword that moves in silence can cut thru its sharpness. Sometimes in our lives it is just like that.
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Beautiful poem👌
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Thanks Shayra
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My pleasure 😊
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You are a master poet really you are
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Thanks so much dear Bella.
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Excuse me, Kamal – that was lovely, but what was it really about? Am I allowed to ask this question about poetry? Maybe not, but I love to know what is in the mind of a creator. 🙂
Kindness – Robert.
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Oh it was all about a sword and what it is in the hands of a layman and in the hands of a warrior it knows what to do. I hope u can understand now the sword. Thanks anyways for your great comments
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I understand that very well now, Kamal. What prompted you to write on this interesting subject?
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Oh just had from a long time and then just polished it like a sword. Sometimes u know words just flow when writing a poem.
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I understand that. Thanks. 🙂
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Welcome
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A lovely composition…
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Thanks Susmita
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You’re welcome
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Absolutely nice 👌👌👏👏
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Thanks so much Nath. Have a great day.
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Beautiful poem !!!!
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Thanks Rekha
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👌👍
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thanks once again
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Wow! Great! have a nice weekend ahead. ,-) Michael
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Thanks Michael already and u too have a great weekend ahead.
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Thx 😉
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Lovely poem with graceful imagery. Well done. 🙂
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Thanks Diana for your great comments.
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Hey! Just thought I’d let you know I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award! I really enjoy your blog, thank you for improving the world in the way you do 🙂 Check out the nomination post here: https://understandinghelps.com/2017/08/24/mystery-blogger-award-nomination/
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Hey thanks friend for your kind words and I am so happy u have nominated me for this award.
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👏👏👏 swell poem
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Hey thanks Deshi.
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A super poem, Kamal. A wonderful share.
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Thanks so much Robbie for your comments.
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So well written as always dear 😊😊 Very meaningful. I love it! x x
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Thanks so much dear Capili for your feedback. Have a great day.
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You are most welcome lovely 😊😊 Thank you. You too x x
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Thanks once again and have a wonderful day, Capili.
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You are most welcome 😊😊 Aww thank you dear, you too x x
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Welcome Capili
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😊😊 x x
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Thanks dear have a great day.
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You too 😊😊 x x
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Thanks.
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Beautiful composition..👏
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Thanks dear.
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You are welcome..☺️
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Thanks
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Beautifully penned
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Welcome.
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It is so well rhymed. Love it. ☺
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Thanks Sweta.
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An amazing composition!
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Thanks Sumith.
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Beautiful thoughts as always
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Thanks Rhapsody.
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I have always enjoyed Oriental Swords, this is why this article caught my attention. I liked the poem so I am going to reblog it for you.
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You know out of the blue I thought of writing this poem cause from a long time I was imaging a sword to be similar to the poem I made and yes Oriental Swords are awesome. Thanks so much Ted.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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Oh thanks so much for your kind gesture, Ted. It is so nice of you to reblog my poem.
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ur sword represents u too….
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Hey thanks Disha so much
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anytime buddy
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Welcome
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🙂☺
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Thanks.
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That was well crafted, Kamal. Good job. 🙂
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Thanks dear.
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