He was a silent river
Going along the current
A constant movement
A rare flowering shrub
He was a song of the birds
A fusion of the purest gold
He was a wandering monk
Footloose and fancy free
Roots of the Wise Trees
Could not drag His pace
Though he was enlightened
He continued to be penniless
Nothing was special about Him
Veiled in a cloak of stillness
Laughter a flooded energy
His light stretched far and beyond
When He speaks His Silence blooms
Penetrating the Mystery of Words………..
Just great
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Oh thanks so much Ben.
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Beautiful lines, expressed the power of silence
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Thanks Subbashini for the beautiful comments and yes the Silence that is deep within Him that speaks volumes.
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Most welcome
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Thanks.
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profound, well written 🙂
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Thanks so much dear Kate.
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my pleasure Kamal 🙂
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Welcome Kate
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Wow!!!
So beautifully written and displayed.
I love it so much I am going to reblog it on my website.💜
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Thank you so much dear friend for your beautiful comment and you know what once I put it across even I find that I have done such a wonderful piece of work. Thanks for reblogging.
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Yeah you you should be proud!
What inspired it?
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Nothing in particular but when you read books on similar lines then that just clicks and then I make my poems. Thanks once again and yes feel so nice and happy that I can do a good piece of poetry.
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Ah cool
Well I love and I just reblogged it👍🏼
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Thanks for your kind gesture.
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Beautiful as well as powerful words
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Thanks Lavanya for your great comments.
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btw I have nominated your name in Liebster Award (well I know you are not a new blogger but I just love your poems as well as stories. They are really motivating with great teachings so I couldn’t resist myself from nominating you), please checkout my latest post. Waiting for your response and answers.
Thankyou 🙂
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Oh ya I know Lavanya and yes I know will definitely nominate myself and thanks so much once again for nominating me. Thanks for your kind words and yes it is so nice to keep on encouraging and inspiring bloggers as well even i get motivated too. Ya will definitely right now go and comment.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Oh thanks so much friend for your grateful gesture.
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Lovely.
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Thanks Karen.
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Beautifully expressed!!! It’s always a great reading your post!!
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Oh thanks so much Tanvir for these wonderful words.
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Most welcome 😊😊
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Thanks.
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Wonderful image of the monk in the desert. Your poem tells an important tale,
Funnily I posted a poem along the same sentiment a few weeks ago.😊
miriam
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Thanks Delphini I remember u posting and yes I got this wonderful picture from Google which was so apt with the poem
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Sorry Miriam
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Why sorry? I love what you written from this peaceful angle.
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Thanks Miriam
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Wow! So much conveyed in those few lines, but the concluding two lines were the icing on the cake Kamal 💜
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Thanks Radhika and yes I too agree with u such powerful and profound words just words flow sometimes. Have a great day dear
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You too!!
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Wow, Kamal – what a beautiful way your mind works with words!!!
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Thanks Elizabeth for these wonderful words and yes even after I completed writing was wondering was that me
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You really do have mad talent my friend!
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Thanks Elizabeth, have a great day
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Well composed verses, Kamal! 👍
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Thanks so much for your great comments, Indira.
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Beautiful poetry and exquisite combination of words …last 2 lines just echo and sink deep.
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Thanks so much for your great comments and yes the last two words were very deep and true
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You are most welcome.
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Thanks
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Lovely poem, and also the picture was captivating too.
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Thanks Moushmi for your great comments and yes found an apt picture with my poem.
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Great poem..☺ by the way, I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award.☺😁❤
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Thanks friend for your kind words and thanks for nominating me.
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You’re welcome😁☺
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Thanks
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Very deep echoing lines.. Great job!
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Thanks Courtney for your great comments.
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A most meaningful poem, Kamal.
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Thanks Robbie
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Thanks for appreciating the poem that I posted of A Wandering Monk. Feel nice and grateful.
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Very well crafted..Beautifully written..
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Thanks so much for your superb comments
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You are welcome. You totally deserve it..
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Thanks dear, have a great day.
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You too..
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Wandering for Him was a Time Pass
For He was much ahead of Time and Space
No Heaven would match His Thoughts and Joy
Comes One; Once upon a time with Boundless Blessings on 🌎 Earth
Kamal accept this one from Earth🌷
Shiva🎵
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Yes absolutely true and that is a wandering monk who is not affected by anything but quietly moving on to his one destination to find himself in all this wonderful scenery that is life. Sure comes one in thousands to know his destination. Thanks for your beautiful words of perfection too, Shiva
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