Like a river you flow
Winding your way to the Seas
Like a rainbow in the celestial sky
U glow in spectral shades as a medley
Like a beam of light
U Spread rays of hopeful promises
Like a Candle in the wick
U are never extinguished
Like a phoenix in seamless flight
U soar to wings of freedom
Like a flower that unfurls its petals
U dance to its blossoms in delicate tunes
Like a human, an uncut diamond
Heartbreaks and failures, is a part of your life?
Like a Free Spirit
U Run to the One who is calling
Filling U with Showers of His Love
Wow💞very well written… I totally got a feeling of being free👏✌✌✌💞
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Thanks so much dear Shivee and yes after I wrote this poem even I feel it is so nice to just be a free spirit wandering here and there, no one to pull us.
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😇✌👍Exactly and you are most welcome😇
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Welcome dear so when r u writing
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When I feel like😅😅😅I actually set time everyday to write but sometimes I just can’t write, mmm…. hope the mood strikes soon😅😅will let you know after posting di✌😊
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For sure send it to me don’t worry.
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✌✌I m glad that you asked about it😊Have a good time✌😇❄
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You too dear.
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😇
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Ahhhh finally posted di❄😇
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Yes dear I have read your poem did u get my comments do let me know
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Yeah di I
got it😇😇❄thank you once again
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Welcome dear
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❄😇❄
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Happy smiling day to u
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U too💞❄
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You must be having holidays right
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Yeah after exam holidays🎉🎉🎉😂
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Good enjoy dear
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Yeah, you too😇👍
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😊😊😊😊😊
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What a fun poem! I enjoyed how it was written as much as what it said.
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Thanks so much for your great words Kris. So happy u liked it.
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Like sunshine,
Your poem radiates warmth and happiness 👍
Very well written Kamal 🙂
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Thanks so much Radhika for your radiating words and yes even I found it so lovely after I wrote it. Spreading warmth and happiness is so beautiful.
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👍👍💖
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Love you too Radhika.
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mesmerizing..
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Thanks Shilpa.
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Great poem
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Thanks Ben
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Free and liberating to spread happiness……. Great work 👍.
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Thanks dear Sudalai for your superb words.
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Welcome , Kamal .
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Thanks
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Amazingly beautiful! Free like a free spirit! You have captured the feelings that I’m going through these days. A little bit more emotional and this poem and each word touched the strings of my soul Kamal!
You have amazing talent as if blessed by God! Try to write more often! 💖
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Thanks Meenakshi loved these beautiful words that u only could say. You know even I found it so great as if all this is a free spirit and we r just with him who is showering his grace on us. Thanks once again.
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Yes this all are his blessings that we are connected here and can share these pearls!
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Yes absolutely and He is our God who writes all this thru us. How is your brother send him your love and light he will get better
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Thanks for asking! I’m doing that regularly after interacting with you!
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Great send him a pink type of a great ball which too will cure him
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Ok! Understood will do that too! 👍
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Great it will help him a lot
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In reiki they have taught us send him a pink ball of light
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I will share dome amazing experience of mine with you over ph soon regarding same!
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Yes pl do would love to hear them
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One more thing I loved the stunning picture 😍
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Oh thank u so much it looks like a free spirit out on the run
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Beautifully written. 😊
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Thanks for the great comments Puneet
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Very nice…too good actually
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Thanks for the beautiful comment Kalyan
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I love this Kamal. It is beautiful!!!😀
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Thanks Chevvy for your superb words.
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My absolute pleasure! 😀
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Thanks dear.
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Beautiful my friend!
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Thanks so much Houston for your great words.
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Thank you, Kamal! It is so lovely to meet you. Lovely poem. (I like writing poetry too … it is so light-filled and freeing).
Welcome to Forgiving Connects. So good to have your presence on the blog. Hope it is wonderful for you. ❤ Sending you much joy — Debbie
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Thanks Debbie same here it is a pleasure to meet u and I am so happy to note that u loved my poem. It is so nice and refreshing to write poems that r light hearted too. A happy day to u.
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And to you too, Kamal. Today is the International Day of Happiness!! 🙂 Have a blessed week. ~Debbie ps – Keep writing
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Thanks Debbie happy day to you.
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I love it! I read it twice … because I realized :
it was musical without rhyme,
Like the whirling dervishes in time.
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Hey thanks so much loved your beautiful words and yes quiet like the dervishes like free spirits in a whirl. Sometimes words just pour out like a river .
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Those are the best: when words and images flow together, like best friends!
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Yes absolutely happens and surprises me too. Thanks so much for your superb comments.
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Wonderfully uplifting poem, that makes me spirit feel free to soar, where anything is possible. I love it! Well done. 😀😀
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Thanks 🙏 Annika and yes once I made this poem even I felt like a free spirit dancing away.
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Ya.. flowing like a feather ..without having any limits or borders..
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Yes dear and happy 😊 as a lark with no worries simply free spirit. Thanks Akhila.😊😊😊😊
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You are really lovable…😊😊
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Thanks dear Akhila and you too are so cute love all your sweet posts. Happy day to you.
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😘😘
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Hugs and Love to you dear.
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Beautifully written your poem
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Thanks Voulaah
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you are very welcome
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Beautiful!!!!🙂
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Thanks Indira
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Beautiful, inspirational and empowering verses! 👍💯🌟
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Thanks for the beautiful comment. Feel so happy.
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Mesmerising and utterly beautiful.
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Thanks for the beautiful comment. A free spirit that we all r with the inspiring nature at its best
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Exactly!
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Yes. Thanks.
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Great one!! Totally love this.
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Thanks so much Kally for your lovely words. Happy day to you.
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Hey thanks so much for nominating me for this wonderful award. Will surely accept it. A happy day to you.
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This poem was deeply spiritual for me, Kamal. So freeing, the feeling of turning every over to the Creator. Thank you for inspiring it.
xx,
mgh
(Madelyn Griffith-Haynie – ADDandSoMuchMORE dot com)
ADD Coach Training Field founder; ADD Coaching co-founder
“It takes a village to transform a world!”
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Thanks Madelyn and I wrote it with him in my thoughts and yes so free as a spirit in each and everything that I described. Loved your great words too.
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Well your intention got through – at least to me.
xx,
mgh
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Thanks dear we r all free spirits but our Shadows have kept us away from him but to know little bit of him is bliss
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I pray to know more, Kamal.
xx,
mgh
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Great will surely tell u Madelyn
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Beautifully penned…. Those words became brighter as a bright soul wrote them from heart full of love and compassion. A truly amazing soul you are…. Thank you for spreading light…. Freedom is our intrinsic nature covered by been conditioned with outside world and been staying in comfort zone.
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Thanks 🙏 Pawan right now I am feeling so happy to hear these beautiful words from you and u too write from the source I really like your posts. Sometimes reading great thinkers and wise men really feels good. Some knowledge we too can grasp though they go above our understanding.
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Just on process of learning and becoming we are….
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Yes we have to unlearn who we r and to know our real nature is the souls being to know Who Am I.
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Yes, Kamal ji
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Reblogged this on shivashishspeaks.
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Thanks so much Shivashish for your kind gesture
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My pleasure
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Welcome have a great day.
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Heart breaks and failure indeed are the part of life. Without a heartbreak we never feel the importance of love and without failure there is no success. It’s wonderful ❤❤❤
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Yes absolutely agree with you and so nice to be a free spirit and not worry about anything just let go and be happy as a lark and all this is Him in all nature that is so beautiful. Thanks dear.
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Awesome comparisons. I totally loved this amazing poem 🙂
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Thanks once again Sheetal and yes in each and every stanza there was a free spirit ready to take wings.
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I felt a sense of freedom reading that poem. 🙂
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Yes dear and same here when I wrote it I too felt that it had come out so beautifully as if I had become free from myself and was running wild.
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Haha wish we really could fly like a free bird. 🙂
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Yes absolutely Sheetal I hope we could. You know God also needed to give us wings that we could fly away whenever we wanted.
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Yes indeed. But unfortunately he didn’t. 😦
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Hahaha yes Sheetal just my imagination.
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Haha I know that. 😛
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Yes.
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Awesome,Beautiful, Cute, Darling, Enjoyment, Fantastic, Gospel, Handsome, Ideal, Justify, Kingly, Lovingly, Mindful, Naturally, Oneness, Picturesque, Quintessence, Reliant, Supremely, Tribute, Utopian, Virtuous, Well, X factor, Zenith.
Kamal I have finished all the Alphabets to praise your post.
Are You Happy…..
😃
Shiva
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Thanks so much for your superb words and they have made me a free spirit all dancing to these words of beauty. Yes yes u have finished the alphabet Shiva. Thanks once again.
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Oh ‘Y’ is left out so it is
Yippee
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Hahaha great
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Beautiful, Kamal!
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Thanks friend
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