Like A Free Spirit…….


Like a river you flow

Winding your way to the Seas

Like a rainbow in the celestial sky

U glow in spectral shades as a medley

Like a beam of light

U Spread rays of hopeful promises

Like a Candle in the wick

U are never extinguished

Like a phoenix in seamless flight

U soar to wings of freedom

Like a flower that unfurls its petals

U dance to its blossoms inย delicate tunes

Like a human, an uncut diamond

Heartbreaks and failures, is a part of your life?

Like a Free Spirit

U Run to the One who is calling

Fillingย U with Showers of His Love


123 thoughts on “Like A Free Spirit…….

      1. When I feel like๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…I actually set time everyday to write but sometimes I just can’t write, mmm…. hope the mood strikes soon๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…will let you know after posting diโœŒ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  1. Amazingly beautiful! Free like a free spirit! You have captured the feelings that I’m going through these days. A little bit more emotional and this poem and each word touched the strings of my soul Kamal!
    You have amazing talent as if blessed by God! Try to write more often! ๐Ÿ’–

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  2. Thank you, Kamal! It is so lovely to meet you. Lovely poem. (I like writing poetry too … it is so light-filled and freeing).

    Welcome to Forgiving Connects. So good to have your presence on the blog. Hope it is wonderful for you. โค Sending you much joy — Debbie

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  3. This poem was deeply spiritual for me, Kamal. So freeing, the feeling of turning every over to the Creator. Thank you for inspiring it.
    (Madelyn Griffith-Haynie – ADDandSoMuchMORE dot com)
    ADD Coach Training Field founder; ADD Coaching co-founder
    “It takes a village to transform a world!”

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  4. Beautifully penned…. Those words became brighter as a bright soul wrote them from heart full of love and compassion. A truly amazing soul you are…. Thank you for spreading light…. Freedom is our intrinsic nature covered by been conditioned with outside world and been staying in comfort zone.

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    1. Thanks ๐Ÿ™ Pawan right now I am feeling so happy to hear these beautiful words from you and u too write from the source I really like your posts. Sometimes reading great thinkers and wise men really feels good. Some knowledge we too can grasp though they go above our understanding.

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  5. Heart breaks and failure indeed are the part of life. Without a heartbreak we never feel the importance of love and without failure there is no success. It’s wonderful โคโคโค

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  6. Awesome,Beautiful, Cute, Darling, Enjoyment, Fantastic, Gospel, Handsome, Ideal, Justify, Kingly, Lovingly, Mindful, Naturally, Oneness, Picturesque, Quintessence, Reliant, Supremely, Tribute, Utopian, Virtuous, Well, X factor, Zenith.
    Kamal I have finished all the Alphabets to praise your post.
    Are You Happy…..

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