He was a seeker
Who went in search of Himself
His own shadows kept on chasing him
Along the way he crumbled, fell like ashen leaves
Yet he picked himself up and carried on boldly
Sailing the wide oceanic waves of bliss
Woven with beautiful hearts and souls
Rejoicing in little gestures of love
Self-created roles often played
Be it richest of the rich or poorest of the poor
Lived and departed myriad times
Sometimes thrown as cast off iron
Or caressed and kept encased as a diamond
A voice was calling out to Him
Come I am searching you from eternities
Once He found that Voice, He was set free………….
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Nicely penned!! π
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Thanks Zeenat.
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Ya..we all awaiting to hear that voice
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Thanks dear and yes so true
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Love the word craft here. βΊοΈ
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I don’t know why but it just reminded me of the novel “The ALCHEMIST”
We all want to hear that eternal voice!
Beautiful, it is!
Have a great tomorrow Di! π
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Thanks dear feel so happy always to receive great feedback. πππππ
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My pleasure Di! π
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πππππharsh let me know when your exams get over then in your holidays we can work on some posts too.
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Will let you know Di as soon as I get free. π
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Kamal, you write so beautifully. The flow of your words just life the flow of life. A beautiful piece as always.
If we accept the path of life and its lessons, the good and bad lessons. Then, i find myself and i find myself again and again as i walk through lifes stages. Well that is how i ferl.
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Thanks so much Bella for your great π words and I am so happy u loved the poem. Yes and I agree with what you too said Bella. Each and everyone has to find his or her search and that voice is nothing but him when he understands that there is no one but him who he was searching for.
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Love your poem Kamal.. very refreshing!
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Thanks π dear for these beautiful comments.
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Wow! I can’t agree any more than this Kamal. How beautifully you have penned down the journey of searching. I loved it, Kama. π
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Thanks so much Sumit for these wonderful words. Feel so happy hearing from u.
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Turn and face your shadows. Shine a light. Run and they will only chase you.
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Great what beautiful words and so true, we r simply running after our shadows, not knowing that we r not our shadows but the voice that is us only. Thanks π much appreciated your words.
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Darkness will end shadows just as effectively.
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Yes for sure.
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Tell me about your darkness.
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Sometimes u don’t like darkness cause that gives u an eerie feeling but it is just a phenomena there has to be day and night.
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Darkness cloaks. Some things are done more easily in the dark.
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Yes why not
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Hey Kamal, I already moved my blog from this old address to my new blog address: http://www.kizodanielsblog.com
I transferred your WordPress subscription to my new blog, so you still get to see my posts on your WordPress feed, but I would love it so much if you could subscribe instead via EMAIL so that you get every post delivered in your mailbox.
Also, I tried to see if there was a way I could follow your blog posts via email but didnβt see the box for that. Kindly let me know if thereβs a way I can do that. I’ll be setting this old blog address to ‘private’ soon.
Check out my new blogβ¦and subscribe to that via email. Thanks.
http://www.kizodanielsblog.com
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K for sure will give you my email address. It is chaklikamal@gmail.com so now you can send me your post in this email id of mine. Thanks for your being in touch. Have a nice day.
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Okay great. That’s wonderful. Will add you to the mailing list. But you would have to confirm the subscription in your mail though. I’ll let you know when I add it.
By the way, how do I stay connected to your blog posts via email too?
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All my blog posts are there on my gmail account so you can go and check or see here in wordpress too. Do let me know.
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Okay. I already added your email address. Check your mailbox to confirm the subscription.
Do I give you mine to get me subscribed to yours too?
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K for sure do send me on gmail account will go and check it Kizo.
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Nice one kamal. I really liked it. You may want to consider changing eternities to eternity. Other than that it’s a wonderful piece of work π
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Thanks so much Durga for your great comments and will do so in my blog Thanks so much for giving proper word.
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Hey it was proper infact it was wonderful. Just that some places we can avoid using prural of a word π there wasn’t anything extremely wrong.
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Hi! This one is beautiful! We all are lost somewhere trying to reconnect to self! Harsh is right it reminds the book Alchemist! Great work!
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Thanks Meenakshi for these wonderful words and yes all of us r in search of ourselves only
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Lovely! Really nicely done, Kamal!
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Thanks Kunal for your great words. Have a nice day.
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Welcome! You have a lovely day yourself
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So nice and well written.
I would kindly request you to read my posts titled ‘The Infinite Illusion’ and ‘Irony of Humanity’:
https://multitudeofmythoughts.wordpress.com/2016/12/20/the-infinite-illusion/
https://multitudeofmythoughts.wordpress.com/2017/01/21/irony-of-humanity/
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What is your name just don’t feel like calling you friend and I am so very happy that you have so kindly read all my posts. Ya will now go and see both your sites.
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Shivangi here.
I just hold one site.The two links I have sent you belong to the same site.
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Hi your two posts were awesome. So much wisdom dear, keep it up. Felt so happy reading your posts.
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Thanks a TON!
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Welcome.
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Thanks
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Wonderful work dear π π x x
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Thanks π so much dear friend for your beautiful words. Have a nice day.
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Your welcome lovely π π x x
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Thanks π same to you to πππππ
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π π x x
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Finding a Guru is such a bliss.
Seeking shall take him there.
Difficult to find a seeker.
The Guru always in seek of the disciple.
Both Seekers if met.
No place greater than that.
In Search of Himself Both.
Fondest Regards,
Shiva
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Wow so great and awesome, Shiva now you too must write few poems like this and am feeling so happy that there is someone sharing these sweet words of theirs with regard to the poem penned. Great, great and so true Finding a Guru who takes you and shows you who you really are and then just merge in Him. Thanks once again.
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Thanks and I shall attempt Kamal.
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Great πππππ
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