Thoughts! what are you thinking
Constantly buzzing like a mosquito
Or keep on jumping like a monkey
Chewing our brains out from morn to dusk
You can make us, or break us
Leave us darling for the time being
Why donβt you go for a long drive?
Or go trekking up the mountains
Take a class on soothing meditation
It will surely quieten your mind
Certainly not, will you be invited for high tea
Or you will become so complacent
Contently snuggled under a warm rug
Do not feed on wheels of egoism
Let go and be your charming self
Be our friend and not our foe…………..
Certainly, a moment with no thought is blissful.
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Yes for sure Ramesh and it would be so blissful thanks for your beautiful words
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Such a beautiful thought on “thoughts” :). Loved it. They too love to dwell in our minds so much, maybe that’s why they refuse to leave us even for a moment π
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Thanks for your great comments and yes they r all the time dwelling in our mind and will stick like a glue.
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Your blog shows a range of writing styles which is a nice attribute to have as a writer. Keep writing, keep thinking.
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Thanks so much for your superb words and yes feels nice to be versatile.
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Love the writings. Keep it up! β€ Definitely appreciate it
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Thanks for your great words. Have a great day
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Beautiful quote!! Loved the writing. Thank you Kamal.
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Thanks Sumith. ππππ
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Thanks dear ππππ
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You are very welcome!
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Love the picture that comes with this post! Keep on rocking here!
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Thanks so much Jon for your beautiful words.
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No problem!
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Kamal, this is purely a thoughtful poem and each and every word describes love here. Loved it. π
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Oh am so happy to hear these beautiful words from you Sumit felt like penning different words. Thanks so much.
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We need to watch our sea of thoughts that churns inside us incessantly, as you rightly said, and one needs to shy away from their negative froth and cling to the positive breeze that flows over it… Loved it Kamal.
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Thanks Sunith and loved your thoughts it is so good to know how we all feel with our thoughts. Thanks once again
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Most welcome dear
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Thanks
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Trekking up the mountains…π…let go off..
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Thanks Akhila and I think again there is a problem cause your comments are going in spam folder and so sad but what to do. Anyways thanks for your lovely comments and yes why not we can do that and leave them in the mountains.
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Is that spam thing not yet rectified in your case….do you find any other comments also in spam..or its me alone
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Yes dear you know sometimes since we are on google some other messages too are coming on some of my posts but then i am ignoring them. Ya but not lots so I then go and reply to them by first retrieving from my folder and then do the needful. What about you.
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so far so good.. no much issues..
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Great
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Akhila, Harsh and me have written on another site known as fagnum and I too have written an article on that site. I will give you that site name. If you have the time, kindly have a look at that site. It is called:
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will check it
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Thanks dear and give your great feedback too.
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http://www.fagnum.com/blog/a-man-named-sage/ would you like to be a member of this group do let me know.
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Thinking about thoughts and silencing them…amazing! Love reading your thoughts on thoughts π
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Thanks Meenakshi no idea why my comments are not going thru. Anyways always feel very happy when you say something on my poems. Thanks once again dear.
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Which comments Kamal?
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We certainly do need to watch our thoughts. Least they lead us astray. Thank you.
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Yes for sure and then jump like π monkeys. Thanks for your lovely comments.πππππ
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Light&Love.
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Thanks happy day to you friend
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Love this…
What a great way to talk about thoughts buzzing like a mosquito and jumpling like a monkey.
On a side note . My reader doesnt seem to let me know when you have posted something so sorry i have missed reading all these wonderful posts.
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Hey it is completely k, Bella and yes they keep on buzzing all the time like a mosquito and jumping like a monkey, never letting us be quiet and concentrate on what we want to do. Thanks for appreciating my poem.
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You are definitely good with words.. It flows well. Great poem!
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Thanks Jasmine you give such great feedback, it feels so good. We’re u on leave did not see u on blogging for quite sometime. I was wondering today only.
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I have accepted many books from the publishers and authors as well as signed up for buddy reads so I had to focus on reading and not have a lot of spare time to visit different blogs to comment. I’m not so good with freeing myself time apparently π
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Great πJasmine do what u like.
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Well said. β₯
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Thanks π appreciate your thoughts.
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