The more I found myself
The more people I lost
Who am I searching but myself?
Layer by layer, all I thought I had to be
Fell apart as gathered rolling stones
Where did I go wrong Oh! God
Was I not created from you?
So merciful and benevolent you are
Then why was I thrown to the gallows
Was I so unworthy in your eyes?
I was left standing naked and vulnerable
Without identities, masks and labels
My Soul keeps on asking ‘Who Am I’
Open your gateless gate, arms outstretched
Hold me tight, lest I fall again
Let your love envelop me like a cocoon
Take me home where I truly belong………….
Beautiful 💖
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Thank you so much.
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Wooooooooooooooowwwww!!!!!
This is one of the most beautiful poems I’ve read from you!
The way you used the magic of your pen is truly awesome!!
🙂
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Wow even I am feeling Wow after reading your beautiful words. Harsh where are you, missing you. Where is your story dear or you are busy. Thanks and even I found it very nice after I kept it on the blog. Harsh is there a different way where we can share our poems.
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I welcomed you at my blog but you never came. The episode is still “soona soona” without your comment, haha
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K will go and see right after my dentist appointment
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Sure Di!
I hope you’re well. 😊
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Yes dear only some teeth problem will now go and see your beautiful story.
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Hahaha
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Wow!!! This is so beautiful ❤🌷 … Loved it 👍👍 keep on shining Kamal 😊
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Thanks Abeer for your great words. Will surely keep on shining friend. Have a nice day.🙏🙏🙏🙏
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My pleasure dear 🙂 🙂
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You are a master of words. Brilliant.😊
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Thanks friend for your great words.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Wow! So beautiful and just wow! I love this!!!
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Thanks so much Enigma for your lovely words feel so happy and great.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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You’re welcome dear❤
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🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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beautiful .. very well expressed..
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Thanks Chitra have a nice day.
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Thanks. Good night 🙂
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Good night dear.
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We need to hug ourselves. oh that was so beautiful , flowing waves the test of life, to be then held the arms of our loving father. The children said they wanted to go out an play So God our father let us. But then we played so much we forgot the way home and we forgot him.
just a beautiful poem,smoothing to read , and calming to the heart.
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Yes dear for sure we forgot him and got ourselves stuck up in alley ways and lanes when he is showing us the right path and telling us that I am always there walking with you, holding on to you but we have forgotten our father who is so loving and beloved. Thanks for your awesome words and giving such good feedback. Loved your words too. Have a great day friend.
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Pleasure
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Beautiful work as always 🙂 🙂 x x
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Thanks dear friend for your kind words. Happy day to you.
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Your welcome 🙂 🙂 you too x x
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Take care.
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🙂 🙂 x x
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I love and see also myself in your words!
By the way it reminded me of this song … Iwonder how many outhers?
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Thanks dear Luigi and yes will surely go and have a look on You Tube will be great to know more about Myself. Actually if you go to see we are all one so why not see yourself too in this Myself poem. Welcome.
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Brilliant!! So beautifully written as always!!
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Thanks dear Sumith for your great comments. Happy day to u.
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You are an absolute shining star!!
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Thanks so much Sumith for your fantastic words. Happy day to you.
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Start of a day, reading your posts is an ignite of a beautiful day!! Have a nice day Kamal.
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Thanks dear, makes me too feel happy and where are your posts not seeing them from a long time Sumith.
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Thank you Kamal. It took a while for me to settle back. Please go through my last post.
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K Sumith will surely do so.
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So beautiful, Kamal!
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words. Have a happy day.
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Good day to you too!
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👌👌👌
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Fabulous piece!
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Thanks Kunal for your wonderful words.
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Each and every line has its own meaning. Wow. I completely loved it Kamal. 😊
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Thanks again for your beautiful comments Sumit and I have always found it so nice to always hear from you.
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😇☺
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Thanks 🙏
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Thanks 🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Thanks
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🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Very touching…
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Thanks Amanda.
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You’re welcome, but… It’s “Ananya”.😁
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Thanks Ananya
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You’re welcome!!😁
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Beautifully written and I was captivated from the first two lines…how true that often as you find yourself you lose people along the way…Never an easy journey but often necessary.
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Thanks friend for your beautiful comments and yes so true cause the reality is we have never known who we r and the moment we realise we start losing our own self. Happy day to u.😊😊😊😊
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Words that can melt hearts! Those who can’t see goodness of your soul are blind even after having eyes!
Touched my heart! 💖
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Beautiful profound thoughts.
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Thanks so much for your great words Joel.
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You’re welcome Kamal.
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Thanks.
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Thanks too for sharing it.
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Welcome.
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There are a lot of truths in this one. like .. “the more ( found myself the more people you lost”…
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Thanks and yes absolutely true cause the moment u find yourself you lose all.
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Beautiful Poem ☺
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Thanks
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You are great with words 🙂 love the message
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Thanks for the beautiful comment.
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Anytime:)
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What lovely words you share… made my heart smile..
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Thanks so much friend for your lovely words 🙏🙏🙏🙏
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This is so beautiful and soul searching!You have a wonderful blog forcing people to introspect!
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Thanks so much for your great comments too and I am so happy that you loved my poem on Myself. You know a thought comes to me and then for a few days I will write down something then work on it and then the words simply flow. Thanks once again dear friend.
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Yeah,it is the best way of writing a wonderful piece.
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Thanks once again.
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A correct way to speak your heart; just pen down your emotions and you are expert in that!
Lovely read!♥
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Hi dear can u believe I was just wondering where u had disappeared was missing you and your lovely comments and there what telepathy u right now came on the blog with your great words. Thanks so much for your great feedback. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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This is beautiful, so elegantly written.x
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Thanks friend for your great words. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Very pretty, was a very good read, I am going to reblog this one for you.
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Thanks friend I am feeling so much myself now. Thanks for your great comments.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles: Why people hate the truths' of the real world.
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Reblogged this on WENEZIA™ – Weidens neue Mitte!.
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Thanks 🙏 so much friend, I feel so blessed. Have a nice day.
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Oh, thank you! Its a pleasure to share. We are also blessed to be allowed to reblog. Also a nice day to you! 😉
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WOW wonderful poem
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Thanks Veerpal for your lovely words.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Thanks 🙏
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Sometimes if people leave you because you’re discovering yourself, then it’s a sign that they aren’t true friends. It’s better they gone than to harbour pain later due to their doings.
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Yes absolutely true and thanks for your great words too. 👌👌👌👌👌
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My pleasure Kamal
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👍👍👍
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Thanks.
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beautifully woven words..
but when we try to find ourselves we realize that we are the most unique creator of god.. and the people who leave never really belonged to be with us..
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Thanks so much for your beautiful words and yes as soon as you come to know who you are then you do not want to stick to your past nor to anyone in general. There is only Oneness in Unity and we are all based in him. Have a great day.
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wow.. u talk so profound..
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Thanks and isn’t that our truth with each one of us. I read a lot of spiritual and motivational books and they help me a lot too.
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Me too.. 🙂 this past one year.. I guess only these things have kept me going..
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Yes and that is the only solace for us instead of this hum drum life which takes unnecessary toll on our lives.
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