I’m a bright shining star
With A twinkle in my starry eyes
Heaven’s abode is my playground
Where I play with my charming friends
Forming circles and chains of glowing light
Throwing glimpses of sparkling smiles
From wonderful clear nocturnal skies
Look up dear and see me for who I really am
Who brightens up your dazzling nights?
Wherever you are, I’m there as your guide
I’m there in the sunshine, that warms you everyday
I’m there in the moonlight, that light’s your way
My light is continuously shining bright
Spreading brilliance wherever I set forth
Am delighted to be your trusted aide…………..
Aww beautiful..
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Thanks so much.
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😍
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Well written Kamal 👍🏼
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Thanks dear.
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My pleasure.
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Welcome .
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👍🏼
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It is awesome 😉 😉
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Thanks so much for your awesome comments.
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Anytime 😉
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Welcome.
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That’s a lovely poem! A star is a powerful metaphor
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Thanks friend for your beautiful comments.
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Very well written and I love the picture
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Thanks dear what is your name don’t know it is nice to write feedback with names so if u don’t mind can I know your name. Thanks for your lovely comments.
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You’re welcome and my name is Jamaica.
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Ok dear so will call u Maica right
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My name is Jamaica like the country. That’s so funny everyone calls me Maica. 😊
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Yes but I remember cause I had asked u before and u told me that u r called as Maica hahahaha forget sometimes.
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Yes
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I remember u telling me
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I can’t believe you remembered!
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Yes dear when u said your name is Jamaica and friends call u Maica.
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Beautiful…! 😊
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Thanks 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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You’re welcome 😊
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Thanks
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This made me feel like there is someone up there watching and take care of us ❤ so beautiful😄😄
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Yes dear always and isn’t it true, don’t we feel his presence at all times. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. Have a nice day.
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Yes we do😄 you too have a nice day☺
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Thanks dear.
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Love it Kamal! It could be a star, or you, or that you are a star – so cleverly written. Well done! 🙂
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Hey thanks so much Rajni, your comment had gone into my spam folder just retrieving from there. Thanks for your wonderful words and we all are stars and feel so happy to know that you liked the poem.
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Most welcome! 🙂
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A caring star…lovely poem
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Thanks dear for your beautiful words. Yes isn’t it always caring and being there.
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I do believe in some positive energy….
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Yes of course and that is in us only how to keep ourselves positive in all the negatives too.
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Look up dear and see me for really what I am; a great and a beautiful line. I adore stars, moon personally. They are enough to shine the whole sky through their sparkle. Lovely poem! 😘💓💋💎💖
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Thanks dear Sudershana and yes so nice it is to sometimes see them too in what they really are giving us so much light and in the darkness they are a beacon of light. Thanks for your lovely words dear.
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Suchva beautiful poem Kamal! I read and re-read it many times due to its beauty, positivity and kindness! Loved reading each and every line! 💖💖
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Thanks so, so much dear Meenakshi, I feel so touched by your lovely comments and when u too are a great poet. You know even I read my own poem at three to four times cause even I found it so beautifully worded and all from the stars ✨ perspective. Thanks dear, have a nice day.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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🙂 💖💕
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😊😊😊😊😊😊
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This is so beautiful Di!!!
I love stars!! They are magical and mysterious at the same time. They are beautiful yet so little!
I just loved the thought behind this!
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Thanks Harsh for your beautiful starry comments and yes I thought as much u would love it, even again I too liked it so much once I too posted. Have u posted your fresh story let me know.👌👌👌👌👌🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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No, not yet! I need to write it, I was facing a writer’s block, well. It happened because I am trying to be perfect, even though I hate perfect, still I am not writing because I dear what I will write will come out rubbish!!!
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Kk don’t worry take your time and write when u r in a frame of mind, it happens with all of us.
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And I wanted to say something:
I’m there in the moonlight, that light’s your way
Shouldnt it be just lights (without apostrophe)
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Oh ya correct that I did not see, thanks dear for pointing out. Ya there must not be an apostrophe.
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Harsh but how was the rhyming did u find it kk or could I have kept more am very bad at rhyming can’t just do like many poets.
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Did I tell you that the few of the great poets who had the magic of words in their hands, did not use rhymes?
Poem is not about rhyme, I think. It has a deep meaning in it, and truly I love what you wrote!
It was not kk, but it was too good! 😊
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Oh very good for telling me this, I never knew that they never used rhymes, wow harsh so good now I can write bindaas, hahahaha. Good dear thanks 🙏. So what news how r you baba.
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I am awesome as always!!!
Just under this burden of regret that I am not writing when I should be…. but that fear of not writing perfect is making me go mad!!!
Haha, how r u?
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Hahahaha can I say one thing u r worrying too much how to write and that is why nothing is coming out from your brains, one nice way is to simply quieten your thoughts be a friend to it don’t resist tell your thoughts I am your friend come have tea and biscuits and make them sit quietly and then tell your inner self come dear help me and only u can and then just see, give it a shot.
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Can I say one thing?
This is the most cutest advice I’ve received from a friend, haha…
😊
Thank you so much Di!!!
Will surely calm my inner self, and then we will have a tea party. And then finally, writing….
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Yes yes cause I read in a book that this person too was stuck up and he was a great writer and a motivational guy but come on he to is a human being and got completely stuck up and did not know what to write so he did like how I told u and he could write awesomely and he too was surprised. Even now I will write a poem on thoughts and invite them for tea what say dear Harsh, 😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Amazing!!!
I will surely wait for another great piece from you!
😊😊
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Thanks baba.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 though tomorrow I will write a beautiful story on An angel who is a Mother, a gift from God. Let me know and give your good thoughts
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Thanks Baba
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Harsh seriously do it and then write your heart out and then let me know dear. So nice to get connected na dear sometimes feels so good 😊
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I have come early home so am sitting on WordPress and watching posts and replying too and now in sometime will eat dinner and then watch a murder mystery on to at 9.00 then little bit big boss then sleeping time.
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This is a nice blog but please visit and read the new ultimate theory of human relativity exclusively on My Theory also give me some feedbacks as I am hungry for it.
From your latest follower My Theory.
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Oh why not of course will definitely go and visit your page and if I may give you proper feedback. Thanks dear friend for appreciating my blog, will definitely endeavor for doing better. Have a nice day.
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Hey I have just commented on your Hiccups pl. do let me know whether you received my comment cause my wordpress is not showing me that I have commented do let me know pl.
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Thanks,I just read your comment but please share your thoughts regarding the human theory of relativity.
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K I have commented you can have a look now.
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I didn’t receive any comments after this.
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Just check your spam folder
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Ok
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It’s not in the spam folder. Please comment once more as I love feedbacks.
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K dear wait will tell you again.
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Now check and let me know.
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Nope ,Please chat with me here on wordpress.
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Where did you send the feedback?
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On your My Theory blog go in spam and check it. I have commented four times.
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I got it, I was searching on my Gmail account which is linked with my blog.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Thanks for reading my blog. I will definitely read and browse your blog but Watch out for my upcoming post on Winners and Losers.
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K for sure have a nice day.
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This is wonderful. 🙂
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Thanks Anoop
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🙂
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Such a lovely post!
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Thanks 🙏🙏🙏🙏🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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This is lovely…very nicely written 🙂
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Thanks friend
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Beautiful post Kamal so power in your words. Now you shine like a star!! Thanks for this great share.
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Hahaha thanks and we all are shining so beautifully like beautiful stars in each and everyones lives too. Thanks once again Sumith.
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Write for us too : )
Did you? :p
Pls contribute something. : )
Love
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Hey thanks so much but where do you want me to write, do let me know and on which subject.
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Write anything , on any topics, like prose poetry photography travel cuisine ,spiritual, motivational… Anything and send us
paxetdolor@gmail.com
You can also submit previously written and unpublished works.
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K for sure and then where will you publish and what will u do with what you are telling me to write. Just would like to know. Do let me know.
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Ps-Published on blogs are allowed
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Do let me know what you will do. Thanks.
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Mail us for all queries 🙂
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K will do that.
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