Dil toh baccha hai ji
Thoda kaccha hai ji
Hearts are like the softness of a baby
Radiating warmth, innocent and fun-loving
Like a cuckoo, can fall recklessly in love
Flapping its wings of joy and peace
Pouring forth flames of happiness
Unfurling its petals of affection
Touching each and everyΒ awesome Heart
Sometimes a little rawness breaks them in pieces
Easily hurt and ripped apart in an instant
Laying shattered, unstitched beyond repair
Until a gracious friend comes along
Mending the tender loving soul
And the heart starts rejoicing once again……………………………
“He shouts, fights
And I too
He gets cool fast
But I am not
As Iβm not a child anymore…”
still do you think that a heart gets cool fast as a kid..?
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Thanks you so much dear for your beautiful poem on hearts and yes he does all these things which you make it do cause it follows you wherever you go and of course if you let it rest it will cool just like a soft kid. Loved your words.
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sweetπππ
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Thanks.
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ur welcm. keep posting ππ
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Yes for sure as and when I get something nice and worthwhile. Have a nice day friend.
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Same to u βΊ
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A group of divine words !
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Thanks so much Ramesh for your great words. ππππ
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Hmm…. That gracious friend coming around… Very reassuring. A beautiful, refreshing piece !!!
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Thanks loved your beautiful and warm words and yes so cute isn’t it when hearts r torn apart. Lovely feedback. Have a nice day.πππππ
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Wow, this really depicts the vulnerability of a heart…. that which makes it so beautiful!
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Thanks Gilda for your beautiful words and yes that is what our heart is can love and easily break too. Thanks once again, have a nice day.
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You’re so welcome! Enjoy day!π
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Until a gracious friend come along, mending the tender loving soul- now thats the great lines. I loved reading this. You have talent in poetries though I loved all your articles too but your poetries made me smile. Thanks for sharing πΉππ
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Thanks so much dear Sudershana I was really thinking this time how to write and u know sometimes the words fall in place so beautifully. Ya isn’t it hearts r like this. Your words touched me. πππππ
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Aww dear! Your words too! And yes, hearts are just like this. Love to visit you always ππ
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Thanks so much dear same here. Happy Sunday have a nice day.
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So true some times ,you just keep wondering and wirds fall into place so beautifully .
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Yes and they fall so wonderfully and so many things can be written on hearts. Thanks once again have a nice day friend.πππππ
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Wish you the same stay blessed
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Same to you too have a blessed Sunday.
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Absolutely poignant and lovely.
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Thanks so much dear Nancy for your beautiful comments.πππππ
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This is so beautiful and true
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Thanks so much for your beautiful comments. πππππ
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Thanks for writing such beautiful words π
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Thanks π once again.
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Divine words to stay happy we should always have a happy heart like kids
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Yes and thanks so much for your beautiful comments. U too write so nicely. Keep on giving good feedback Utkarsh.
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A feedback is always a reccomendation for a good and bad qualities so i will keep reccomending youππππ
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Thanks and please do so cause many bloggers without reading simply push the like button and you are then feeling have we not done justice to our work. We must have bloggers who encourage each other’s work, we all are like a family. Thanks once again.
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Yup brother i recommend your words and gn bro
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Good night bro.
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Such a sweet heart π π
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Thanks Meenakshi for your sweet heart too.
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Amazing bro u just did magic with u r words u used
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Hey thanks so much bro, but let me share a little secret, I am a woman and not a man, but it is k, nothing matters where hearts are happy and as soft as a baby. Thanks once again Narsing, have a good day.
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Hahaha sorry dear , I thought u might men ,
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No in India it can be either. It is k, don’t worry.
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Hmmm πππππππ
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Oh sorry , I thought u might be men ,
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Kamal – very cool, I like how you incorporated Hindi into the poem as well!
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Thanks Rajni u r the first person to see that and the theme of the poem is from these two words. Such an amazing observation dear. πππππππ
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A bunch of amazing words!! Thanks for this share Kamal.
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Thanks Sumith for your wonderful words.
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You are welcome my friend!
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Thanks.
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